It really shouldn't of been but it was funny
That was funny. Really funny. You can tell it was made to be serious, though. I think partly the characters don't look good enough, or tuned rather to the style of movie you're trying to make. Obviously very Sin City.
Directing: 7/10
Sound directing: 6/10
Originality: 4/10
Overall you get a 7. I look forward to it.